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Chapter 2: The Visible Gain

Open with Protagonist already under immediate pressure. Deliver "forty-eight-hour timer" through action, conflict, or reveal. Use Key Relative or the key relationship line to complicate the protagonist's read of the situation.

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The Visible Gain

The Pressure Test

Open with Protagonist already under immediate pressure.

The Pressure Test throws Protagonist straight back into pressure. Open with Protagonist already under immediate pressure, and there is no safe pause between realizing it and paying for it.

The scene closes with momentum, but the win is only real because it exposes a harder opponent or a more exp

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