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Chapter 2: The Ledger Cost

Open with Protagonist already under immediate pressure. Deliver "receipt chain" through action, conflict, or reveal. Use Key Relative or the key relationship line to complicate the protagonist's read of the situation.

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The Ledger Cost

The Disturbance

Open with Protagonist already under immediate pressure.

The Disturbance throws Protagonist straight back into pressure. Open with Protagonist already under immediate pressure, and there is no safe pause between realizing it and paying for it.

By the end of the scene, the clue has value only because it opens a worse question and shortens the t

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